Recount Writing - My trip to Australia.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

13/ 03/ 17

On Friday afternoon I went to Australia with my Nana Kahu, my Aunty Kelly, my Aunty Queen and my three cousins.

I was so excited. It was the first time I went in a plane.

When we got on the plane we played on the games. They were fun.

When we got to the Australian Airport we saw  Aunty Cherry and my cousin. We were happy to see them.

When we got to my aunt's house we played on the game.  After that we went to KFC for dinner.

In the morning  we woke up and had breakfast. After that I  got changed and then we went to Movie World.

I went on Superman. It was scary because the ride goes really high and the ride drops and flips upside down.

Then I went on Batman. I felt excited and then we went to Wet n Wild. There were heaps of water slides at Wet n Wild. The water slides were creepy because when I hopped into the high up slides they dropped fast. I landed into the water and the lifeguard helped me to get out.

I had an exciting day at Movie World and Wet n Wild. It was amazing.

Persuasive Writing - Brush your teeth.

I am learning to write my opinion and reasons.

10/ 03/17

Brush your teeth.  

I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day because then we won’t get rotten teeth and we won’t have to get fillings from the dentist.

Secondly we should brush our teeth because then we will have shiny teeth.  

Another reason we should brush our  teeth everyday is because you won't get bacteria and rotten teeth.

Lastly we should brush our teeth everyday so our teeth  can smell nice.

So I think we should brush our teeth every day.

I am learning to find and use information.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

14 /03/17

Rules at school

I think we should have rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules at school because people will feel happy and safe.

Secondly I think we should have rules at school because people won't get hurt. Another reason I think we should have rules at school is because our school will be nice and clean.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Here are my goals for Term 1 2017.

This is the first post on my blog.