I am a year 5 learner at Tautoro School in Northland, New Zealand. I am room 3 and my teacher is Whaea Rosina.
Tuesday, December 11, 2018
Friday, November 9, 2018
Guy Fawkes day
Here is my writing to explain why we celebrate guy Fawkes Day
Guy Fawkes Day
On November the 5th people celebrate Guy Fawkes. Every year they
go around a bonfire and launch beautiful colors of fireworks. But
why does this happen?
go around a bonfire and launch beautiful colors of fireworks. But
why does this happen?
Why do we celebrate Guy Fawkes day?
First the reason why we celebrate Guy Fawkes Day started 400 years
ago. There was a king called James. He was the king of England.
ago. There was a king called James. He was the king of England.
There were two churches in England. One church was called
Catholic. But king James did not like the Catholic people. So he
started to be mean to the Catholic people.
Catholic. But king James did not like the Catholic people. So he
started to be mean to the Catholic people.
Guy Fawkes and his friends started to discuss how they can get back
at the king.
at the king.
So they made a secret plan. The plan was to put gunpowder under the
parliament building right below where the king was going to sit.
parliament building right below where the king was going to sit.
On November the 5th Guy Fawkes was ready with the gunpowder to
blow up the king and his building.
blow up the king and his building.
But someone sent a letter to warn the king about the plan to blow up
the king and his building.
the king and his building.
So King James sent his guards to find Guy Fawkes.
When they found Guy Fawkes they tortured him and killed him.
So in conclusion after the plot failed people burnt bonfires in
celebration to remember Guy Fawkes and the day the king was
saved.
celebration to remember Guy Fawkes and the day the king was
saved.
Why do we celebrate Guy Fawkes day
I created this slideshow using ideas from my writing.
Friday, November 2, 2018
Plastic Pollution
I created this presentation to share my explanation writing about Plastic Pollution
Wednesday, October 31, 2018
Explanation Writing Language
WALT identify some language features of explain writing.
Plastic pollution is ruining our world. It is making Papatuanuku sad. It is getting
worse.
What are people doing to solve this problem?
One thing people are doing is that they are using reusable containers rather
then plastic packaging.
Another thing people are doing is that when they go shopping they use cotton
bags rather than plastic bags.
Lastly what people are doing is that they reduce the plastic by recycling plastic
to make clothes, shoes and furniture then there will be no plastic.
conclusion there is too much plastic in our world. Our sea creatures are dying
from plastic but people are slowly solving this problem so our world will be safe
to
live in.
Highlight the language features of your text with the following colours.
Precise topic words
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Conjunctions-because, then, so
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Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
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Action words.
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Explanation Writing Structure
T identify the structure of explain writing.
Plastic pollution is ruining our world it is making papatuanuku sad and it is getting
worse.
worse.
What are people doing to solve this problem.
One thing people are doing is that they are using reusable containers rather
then plastic packaging.
then plastic packaging.
Another thing people are doing is that when they go shopping they should
use cotton bags rather than plastic bags.
use cotton bags rather than plastic bags.
Lastly people are doing is that they reduce the plastic by recycling plastic to
make clothes shoes and furniture then there will be no plastic.
make clothes shoes and furniture then there will be no plastic.
in conclusion there is too much plastic in our world our sea creatures are dying
from plastic but people are slowly solving this problem so our world will be safe
to live in.
from plastic but people are slowly solving this problem so our world will be safe
to live in.
Highlight the structural features of your text with the following colours.
Beginning/Introduction.
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Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
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Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Conclusion.
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