Recount Writing-At the beach in Whangarei

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

2/08/17

At the beach in Whangarei.

On Saturday afternoon I went for a swim in Whangarei with my family.  When we got there I saw the water. It was blue. I said, “Wow there are big waves.”

We got our new boogie boards. I ran to the blue water and went over the big wave. Mum took me out to sea to catch a wave. It was scary as and it was deep. It was amazing. I was going fast on the big waves. It was fun as on my boogie board. I liked the big waves going fast and then it went faster and faster.

When I got to the sand it was lunch time. Mum was at the back of my board. We had lunch. We had ham and egg sandwiches . After that we went to have ice cream. My ice cream was a chocolate sprinkle one. It was yummy.

We were having a race of who can eat the ice cream the fastest. My dad won.

It was a super cool day with my family.