Recount Writing-At the beach.

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At the beach

25.07.18

On a hot sunny Saturday me and my nana and my two
uncles went to the park in Mangonui.
We wanted to get out of the house because
there was nothing to do.

So we went to the park.
As soon as we got to the park
me and my two uncles went to the swings.
I said, “Should we see who will go the highest?”

I pushed off as fast as I could. I went higher and higher.
My hands were shaking, my heart was beating faster.
My knees felt like jelly. I felt scared.
I nearly went over the pole. It was like being on a trampoline.
I went so high that I won the game.

“Yay! I won! I shouted.
My uncles said, “Whoa you went high Armani.
You get 1 lolly  we promised you a lolly,Armani”
After that we went on to a spinny rolly thing.
I went on it. I asked my uncles to play on it with me.
They said, “Yes, OK.”  I said, “I’m going to win again.”
We got on it.
They were a bit faster than me so they were better than me.
But I was more balanced than them
so I nearly won but I didn't.
I was so close to winning though.
So I had to pay my uncle a lolly.
I really enjoyed my day. It was so fun. .