Recount Writing-At Paihia.

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At Paihia

During the holidays I went to the Pahia beach with Nan,

my uncle and my cousin.

Before we left home we got changed
into our swimming clothes. Then we got some towels
and ran into the car.

I noticed that I was in the wrong then ran to the other car.

I was laughing. Once we left home I fell asleep.

When I woke up there were lollies in my mouth.

I said, “Who put lollies in my mouth?”

My uncle put them in my mouth.
Then I punched him because I didn't like those lollies
that he bought.

My punch gave him a bruise.

My nan was laughing and my uncle was crying.

Once we got to Pahia I was keen for a swim.

My nan said it was twelve o,clock. Then I went to have lunch.
We were all out of excitment so we went
to have fish and chips.
I bought a fish and a drink of fanta.

My uncle bought a fish and a drink of rasberry.

My nan bought a fish and a drink of coke.

My cousin bought a burger and a drink of apple juice.

When all of our orders were ready we ate our food.

It was delicious in my tummy.
When we were finished then we let our tummy rest.
After we finished resting our tummy. We went for a swim.
All of us were excited.

I saw some massive waves.
Me and my uncle were excited so
we ran into the water and dived under the waves.
We were so cold. It was like ice.

I felt like I was going to freeze too.