At my Nan's birthday.

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Ratu 25th Pipiri

At Nan’s birthday.

On a cold freezing Monday I went to my nana’s birthday in
Kaikohe with my Mum, Dad and little brother. 

First we went to the shop to buy her a present. For her present
we got her a bottle of wine and chocolate. Then we went to buy
some pizza for dinner.

When the pizza was ready I ran in and got all the pizzas. It
was
so heavy I was going to drop it! But I was too strong. 

I wouldnt drop it. 

I put the pizzas in the car and we drove to my uncle’s house
where the birthday was. I carried the pizzas again and got to
the door step and took my shoes off. I couldn’t knock on the
door because my hands were full with pizzas so I had to wait
for my Dad to open the door. 

Then he opened the door and when I walked in it was hot! I
was
already sweating. They had a hot fire right by the door. I put the
pizzas
down and me, my Dad, Mum and Kaharau went to hongi and
kiss
people on the cheeks. 

It was exciting. Then me and my little cousin were playing with
the nerf guns. I put 3 bullets in and my little cousin put 5 bullets
in. I was hiding behind the door. He ran into the room that I was
in. I ran and shot him three times and I giggled and ran because
I had no. Then I ran and found a good hiding spot. I was giving
a clue so I yelled, “Kaia!” and he ran and found me. He gave me
a fright. 

I yelled, “Woahhh you gave a fright.” I shot him and ran away.
He had one more life. He shot me 2 times. “Ohh he shot me. I
only have 1 life!” I shouted. 

He had one bullet and I had none. I ran down the hallway and
he shot at me. I turned and caught the bullet and laughed and
\said, “Ohhhhh you missed me.” I put the bullet in my gun and
shot him and I said, “Yaaay I won!” 

I was very thirsty and hot so I took my jacket off. 

Next all off us had dinner. So we said karakia then had a pizza
and drinks. It was delicious and yummy in my tummy.
After that we all rested our stomachs.