Recount writing.

WALT use the correct structure and language.

On a hot sunny Sunday my brothers, me, my aunty, Mum, Dad,
my uncle, Nan and Papa went to Pahia for dinner. First we
went to the playground to just have some fun. 

Me and my brothers ran to the swing. There were three of us
including me. I was on one swing and my brother Josh was on
the other so he had to push us both. He pushed me so hard 9
times I nearly went over the bar so I said stop! But he didn’t
stop pushing me so when he pushed me again I jumped off
the swing and landed on the bark. Then Josh stole the swing
and my other brother copied me and jumped off and he landed
on the grass. We were all laughing at him and then he said he
had a cramp.

I ran to the swing that he jumped off then my little brother
pushed me off and put his stomach on the swing.

He was spinning around and then he couldn’t touch the ground
so then he was spinning the other way and got dizzy. He
hopped off and he was running weird and then he fell over.
My mum said he must have been dizzy as. 

We were laughing. He was as well. He didn't even know what
was happening. After that we all had walked to the dinner.
Me and my big brother had a race. I was sprinting to the
dinner. My dad and uncle drove to the dinner that is Jimmy
Jacks. All of the rest that were behind us walked the
shortcut way. We arrived at Jimmy Jacks. When we
got there, my uncle and dad were inside drinking beer.