WALT use strategies to spice up our writing like show don't tell The mud run
06.08.18
On a hot sunny Sunday me and all of my brothers did a mud run at Ohaeawai. All of the Ohaeawai School kids were there. There were under sevens up to under 12. I was in under 9. This lady put my number on me. My number was 9 Then it was the under nine’s turn i was excited to run then girl said are you ready I said yes then she said go and then all of us went as fast as lightning. But some people were behind us. This boy was up to me and my two friends. He was as fast as a horse. Then there was hay that you could jump over. I jumped off the hay. And I went as high as a bird. Then it was getting cold. My mouth was going like brrrrr brrrrr. There was heaps of mud and it was fun in the mud I tripped over because there were heaps of rocks rocks under the mud it was hard as it was as hard as turtles shell and then we got past the mud hole then there was a big hill it was as big as a mountain I said I give up but I tried my best my leg were dead but i saw the finished line and i spirinted but my two friends over took me and they finished and so that meant I came third I was proud of myself because I did it but i was covered in mud I was pitch black