Persuasive writing-Brushing teeth

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Brushing Teeth.

Teeth have a  very important job.
They help you eat food for your own body.

I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly why I think we should brush our teeth every day
is so that our teeth are healthy and strong.
When you brush your teeth all the bacteria
comes out which makes your teeth healthy and strong.

Secondly why I think we should brush our teeth every day is
so our teeth are nice and clean.
When we brush our teeth all the bacteria and
little bits of food come out. That's why our teeth are nice and clean.

Thirdly why I think we should brush our teeth every day is
so all the bacteria won’t damage your teeth.
The bacteria starts eating our enamel then the bacteria causes holes.  
And that is why we get a toothache.

So that's why I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Goal setting term 2

WALT get more faster and more accurate with basic facts

Weta with Backpacks

WALT use information from a text to create a presentation.

Recount Writing-At Paihia.

WALT add lots of details and information to our Recounts.

At Paihia

During the holidays I went to the Pahia beach with Nan,

my uncle and my cousin.

Before we left home we got changed
into our swimming clothes. Then we got some towels
and ran into the car.

I noticed that I was in the wrong then ran to the other car.

I was laughing. Once we left home I fell asleep.

When I woke up there were lollies in my mouth.

I said, “Who put lollies in my mouth?”

My uncle put them in my mouth.
Then I punched him because I didn't like those lollies
that he bought.

My punch gave him a bruise.

My nan was laughing and my uncle was crying.

Once we got to Pahia I was keen for a swim.

My nan said it was twelve o,clock. Then I went to have lunch.
We were all out of excitment so we went
to have fish and chips.
I bought a fish and a drink of fanta.

My uncle bought a fish and a drink of rasberry.

My nan bought a fish and a drink of coke.

My cousin bought a burger and a drink of apple juice.

When all of our orders were ready we ate our food.

It was delicious in my tummy.
When we were finished then we let our tummy rest.
After we finished resting our tummy. We went for a swim.
All of us were excited.

I saw some massive waves.
Me and my uncle were excited so
we ran into the water and dived under the waves.
We were so cold. It was like ice.

I felt like I was going to freeze too.

Mystery Science

Mothers day

Training at school

Ratu 12th Potu-te-rangi

Training at School

On  a hot hot Saturday me, some Juniors and some Seniors
played rugby league with Matua Matt. First Matua Matt said to
me and Manuera, “Who ever wins rock paper scissors decides
who gets the ball.” l won and I said, “They had to kick the ball
to the people in my team.”

They kicked the ball. I thought it was going to go high but it
went small. It went to Tamaiti. He caught the ball. He ran
through heaps of people. Thenhe fell over. I went up to the ball
and passed it to Andy. Huhana ran through one person then
got tackled by Manuera. Tamaiti passed the ball to me. It was
fast. It was like speed. I ran through heaps of people. I felt hot
like fire. I ran up to the try line. Soni-boy tried to tackle me but
he missed and I scored the try. Everyone was happy. They
were smiling. Next Andy kicked the ball high. I chased it and
tried to catch the ball but Soni-boy caught the ball. I ran to
tackle him and then he stepped me and he ran. Then I got up
and tackled him around the legs. He fell over. I was amazed. I
thought I was just lucky then the bell rung then we ran back to class.