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Friday, August 28, 2020

Caged Chickens.

 WALT use structure and language for explain writing.


Title:Caged Chickens


Definition:

As we know chickens are the most common birds on earth.But there is a problem with chickens.Their is a threat So let's go see what's happening to them!


Body to explain the problem and solution. :

Cage chickens! caged chickens are one of the most highest food product that people eat all over the world. Just like other animals.You can eat them for  chicken. Or you can get their eggs.But caged chickens is when you are caged.You don’t get to see the world as a caged chicken.All you do is sit in a cage your whole life and lay eggs.Imagine what it feels like to not be able to move. Well that is what the caged chickens go through .

Also the packaging of eggs has a big impact on the world. As we know Plastic Pollution is one of the most worldwide killing problems on earth.


And when People package eggs packets to shops all over the world people purchase egg packets not only that all other plastic and cardboard materials.After their finished with all of packets and plastic bags they go to the rubbish dump and dump all of their plastic materials.Then that gets dumped out at sea where all of our sea animals live.So all that plastic spreads.The plastic takes the longest time to decompose so it can just stay out at sea for about a whole century. 


Conclusion:
Therefore I think that we should be looking for a clarification and reduce the impact that is happening on our environment.In the 1980s people around the world have been opposed to caged chickens and have been trying to use reusable bags instead of cardboard bags.Their is a group of children who is called be a champion for chickens.That are against caged chickens and tell people not to buy caged chickens eggs. So they can look for a better way to reduce the impact on our environment.













Structure & Language

Rubric 4: I have all of the structure and one part may be well developed.

AND I use appropriate words for the type of writing.

Ideas

Rubric 4: I have lots of ideas that connect to the topic with some extra information. AND One of my ideas has lots of information.

Organisation

Rubric 5: My ideas are organised into basic paragraphs.

Vocabulary

Rubric 4: I use a range of words and phrases to add detail and give specific information.

Spelling

Rubric 6:I spell Essential List words and a range of difficult* or diverse  words with few or no errors. 

Punctuation

Rubric 4:I mostly use full stops and capital letters correctly.

I use some other punctuation correctly.  

Sentence

Structure

Rubric 4: I can write most of my sentences correctly.

I can write sentences with different beginnings and different lengths and types.

Total

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Friday, July 24, 2020

Friday, June 19, 2020

Spelling G6 L2.


WALT Spell new words,to increase my vocabulary.
Spelling list.

Here are my Spelling words . I got 27/28 correct which means I got one word incorrect .  It has been highlighted pink which means think.
If I stayed focused rather then speeding in my spelling test.

Thursday, June 11, 2020

Gaming Week.

On Saturday morning My two brothers and I Were playing on the PS4 which is
a Console when you can play games There are heaps of games on a PS4 But the
game I play is could Fortnite It was boring and then the game started to get fun you
could play with friends and family it’s fun playing with other people so you can have
fun tell me where other people are.


 you can’t talk to everyone but you can talk to people in your team 
In this game you get guns to shoot other people so you can win the
game.it’s fun when other people shoot the gun because you know to hide
you can also build so when people shoot there guns at me I build so they cant
get me the thing is that you have to try and win the game.

On the next day Sunday Morning My brothers and I were playing with
our friend on Fortnite we were having turns each on  the game so it’s Fair
we were all Shooting other people and we also got shot and we kept dying
and winning. It’s hard to win cause there’s lots of good people on this game
I won one game and so did my brothers when you win the game you look cool and it
means your good at the game.

















Recount writing.

When I came back to School pretty much everything was different because of the Covid19 .Me and other people were confused we always have to wash our hands every time we go and come in we have to use the hand sanitizer.But what was fun is I got to see my friends and we were also allowed to play outside.and we all have to stay 1 metre apart from each other every morning we have P.E wich is exciting and fun.for P.E we could play basketball,Soccer,rob the nest and heaps of other fun games to play.it’s fun being back at school.there is lots of stuff.