I enjoyed playing the ukelele for our prizegiving performance.
I am a year 5 learner at Tautoro School in Northland, New Zealand. I am room 3 and my teacher is Whaea Rosina.
Wednesday, December 12, 2018
Tuesday, December 11, 2018
Friday, November 9, 2018
Guy Fawkes day
Here is my writing to explain why we celebrate guy Fawkes Day
Guy Fawkes Day
On November the 5th people celebrate Guy Fawkes. Every year they
go around a bonfire and launch beautiful colors of fireworks. But
why does this happen?
go around a bonfire and launch beautiful colors of fireworks. But
why does this happen?
Why do we celebrate Guy Fawkes day?
First the reason why we celebrate Guy Fawkes Day started 400 years
ago. There was a king called James. He was the king of England.
ago. There was a king called James. He was the king of England.
There were two churches in England. One church was called
Catholic. But king James did not like the Catholic people. So he
started to be mean to the Catholic people.
Catholic. But king James did not like the Catholic people. So he
started to be mean to the Catholic people.
Guy Fawkes and his friends started to discuss how they can get back
at the king.
at the king.
So they made a secret plan. The plan was to put gunpowder under the
parliament building right below where the king was going to sit.
parliament building right below where the king was going to sit.
On November the 5th Guy Fawkes was ready with the gunpowder to
blow up the king and his building.
blow up the king and his building.
But someone sent a letter to warn the king about the plan to blow up
the king and his building.
the king and his building.
So King James sent his guards to find Guy Fawkes.
When they found Guy Fawkes they tortured him and killed him.
So in conclusion after the plot failed people burnt bonfires in
celebration to remember Guy Fawkes and the day the king was
saved.
celebration to remember Guy Fawkes and the day the king was
saved.
Why do we celebrate Guy Fawkes day
I created this slideshow using ideas from my writing.
Friday, November 2, 2018
Plastic Pollution
I created this presentation to share my explanation writing about Plastic Pollution
Wednesday, October 31, 2018
Explanation Writing Language
WALT identify some language features of explain writing.
Plastic pollution is ruining our world. It is making Papatuanuku sad. It is getting
worse.
What are people doing to solve this problem?
One thing people are doing is that they are using reusable containers rather
then plastic packaging.
Another thing people are doing is that when they go shopping they use cotton
bags rather than plastic bags.
Lastly what people are doing is that they reduce the plastic by recycling plastic
to make clothes, shoes and furniture then there will be no plastic.
conclusion there is too much plastic in our world. Our sea creatures are dying
from plastic but people are slowly solving this problem so our world will be safe
to
live in.
Highlight the language features of your text with the following colours.
Precise topic words
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Conjunctions-because, then, so
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Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
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Action words.
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Explanation Writing Structure
T identify the structure of explain writing.
Plastic pollution is ruining our world it is making papatuanuku sad and it is getting
worse.
worse.
What are people doing to solve this problem.
One thing people are doing is that they are using reusable containers rather
then plastic packaging.
then plastic packaging.
Another thing people are doing is that when they go shopping they should
use cotton bags rather than plastic bags.
use cotton bags rather than plastic bags.
Lastly people are doing is that they reduce the plastic by recycling plastic to
make clothes shoes and furniture then there will be no plastic.
make clothes shoes and furniture then there will be no plastic.
in conclusion there is too much plastic in our world our sea creatures are dying
from plastic but people are slowly solving this problem so our world will be safe
to live in.
from plastic but people are slowly solving this problem so our world will be safe
to live in.
Highlight the structural features of your text with the following colours.
Beginning/Introduction.
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Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
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Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Conclusion.
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Explanation Writing My self-assessment.
WALT use the writing rubric to assess our writing.
Plastic pollution is ruining our world. It is making Papatuanuku sad. It is getting worse.
What are people doing to solve this problem?
One thing people are doing is that they are using reusable containers rather then plastic packaging.
Another thing people are doing is that when they go shopping they use cotton bags rather than plastic bags.
Lastly what people are doing is that they reduce the plastic by recycling plastic to make clothes, shoes and furniture. Then there will be no plastic.
In conclusion there is too much plastic in our world. Our sea creatures are dying from plastic but people are slowly solving this problem. So our world will be safe to live in.
Friday, October 19, 2018
Recount Writing
17/10/18
On a hot sunny Saturday me and my family went to my nans
tangi because she passed away.
tangi because she passed away.
First me, my mum, my dad and 3 brothers went to the farm
near the marae. I went inside and kissed my nana and all the
other people kissed nan to. After that my papa’s frends done a
mihi. Everybody was looking at his friends but me and my
cousins were looking everywhere else. When it was finished
we had some dinner. We had some chips, sauce and bread
all added together. It was delicious.
other people kissed nan to. After that my papa’s frends done a
mihi. Everybody was looking at his friends but me and my
cousins were looking everywhere else. When it was finished
we had some dinner. We had some chips, sauce and bread
all added together. It was delicious.
Then we were going to sleep. My brothers had a sleepover at
the marae but we were bored so we played hide and seek in
the dark. I was the only who was not found because they were
too scared to go by the park cause they always run into the
pole. So I went around looking for them and they were inside.
I got scared because they all gave me a fright so we all went to
bed. Everyone was asleep so we had to be quiet.
the dark. I was the only who was not found because they were
too scared to go by the park cause they always run into the
pole. So I went around looking for them and they were inside.
I got scared because they all gave me a fright so we all went to
bed. Everyone was asleep so we had to be quiet.
The next day we had breakfast. We had french toast. It was so
yum that I had four french toast. Then I played tag in the dining
room where we were eating but there was nothing so I played
with the babies. I was only running my slowest.
yum that I had four french toast. Then I played tag in the dining
room where we were eating but there was nothing so I played
with the babies. I was only running my slowest.
Next I had a shower then I was finished. It was so nice then I
got changed.
got changed.
We went to the car to get the coffin. It was heavy.
We had to carry it to the marae. It was sad. Everyone was
crying.
crying.
It took a long time but I had water so I had a drink. Then we
were at the marae.
were at the marae.
It was lunchtime. There was chicken, potatoes, veggies lollies
and heaps of seafood and a drink. It was so delicious.
After lunch me, my cousins, and my brothers played for a littleand heaps of seafood and a drink. It was so delicious.
while. We were playing soccer and rugby.
Friday, September 28, 2018
Friday, September 14, 2018
Friday, September 7, 2018
Thursday, September 6, 2018
Thursday, August 30, 2018
My Father's Day Poem
Here is my cinquain poem about my Dad.
Tuesday, August 28, 2018
Litter-less Lunchboxes.
We are learning about Plastic Pollution and how it causes problems for our world.
One way I can reduce the rubbish I put in the world
is by bringing a Litter-less lunchbox to school.
Friday, August 24, 2018
Monday, August 13, 2018
Recount writing
WALT use strategies to spice up our writing like show don't tell
The mud run
The mud run
06.08.18
On a hot sunny Sunday me and all of my brothers did a mud run
at Ohaeawai. All of the Ohaeawai School kids were there.
There were under sevens up to under 12. I was in under 9.
This lady put my number on me. My number was 9 Then it was
the under nine’s turn i was excited to run then girl said are you
ready I said yes then she said go and then all of us went as fast
as lightning. But some people were behind us. This boy was up
to me and my two friends. He was as fast as a horse. Then
there was hay that you could jump over. I jumped off the hay.
And I went as high as a bird. Then it was getting cold.
My mouth was going like brrrrr brrrrr. There was heaps of mud
and it was fun in the mud I tripped over because there were
heaps of rocks rocks under the mud it was hard as it was as
hard as turtles shell and then we got past the mud hole then
there was a big hill it was as big as a mountain I said I give up
but I tried my best my leg were dead but i saw the finished line
and i spirinted but my two friends over took me and they
finished and so that meant I came third I was proud of myself
because I did it but i was covered in mud I was pitch black
at Ohaeawai. All of the Ohaeawai School kids were there.
There were under sevens up to under 12. I was in under 9.
This lady put my number on me. My number was 9 Then it was
the under nine’s turn i was excited to run then girl said are you
ready I said yes then she said go and then all of us went as fast
as lightning. But some people were behind us. This boy was up
to me and my two friends. He was as fast as a horse. Then
there was hay that you could jump over. I jumped off the hay.
And I went as high as a bird. Then it was getting cold.
My mouth was going like brrrrr brrrrr. There was heaps of mud
and it was fun in the mud I tripped over because there were
heaps of rocks rocks under the mud it was hard as it was as
hard as turtles shell and then we got past the mud hole then
there was a big hill it was as big as a mountain I said I give up
but I tried my best my leg were dead but i saw the finished line
and i spirinted but my two friends over took me and they
finished and so that meant I came third I was proud of myself
because I did it but i was covered in mud I was pitch black
Tuesday, August 7, 2018
Friday, July 27, 2018
Recount Writing-At the beach.
WALT use strategies to SPICE UP our writing like show don't tell.
At the beach
25.07.18
On a hot sunny Saturday me and my nana and my two
uncles went to the park in Mangonui.
We wanted to get out of the house because
there was nothing to do.
uncles went to the park in Mangonui.
We wanted to get out of the house because
there was nothing to do.
So we went to the park.
As soon as we got to the park
me and my two uncles went to the swings.
I said, “Should we see who will go the highest?”
As soon as we got to the park
me and my two uncles went to the swings.
I said, “Should we see who will go the highest?”
I pushed off as fast as I could. I went higher and higher.
My hands were shaking, my heart was beating faster.
My knees felt like jelly. I felt scared.
I nearly went over the pole. It was like being on a trampoline.
I went so high that I won the game.
My hands were shaking, my heart was beating faster.
My knees felt like jelly. I felt scared.
I nearly went over the pole. It was like being on a trampoline.
I went so high that I won the game.
“Yay! I won! I shouted.
My uncles said, “Whoa you went high Armani.
You get 1 lolly we promised you a lolly,Armani”
After that we went on to a spinny rolly thing.
I went on it. I asked my uncles to play on it with me.
They said, “Yes, OK.” I said, “I’m going to win again.”
We got on it.
They were a bit faster than me so they were better than me.
But I was more balanced than them
so I nearly won but I didn't.
I was so close to winning though.
So I had to pay my uncle a lolly.
I really enjoyed my day. It was so fun. .
My uncles said, “Whoa you went high Armani.
You get 1 lolly we promised you a lolly,Armani”
After that we went on to a spinny rolly thing.
I went on it. I asked my uncles to play on it with me.
They said, “Yes, OK.” I said, “I’m going to win again.”
We got on it.
They were a bit faster than me so they were better than me.
But I was more balanced than them
so I nearly won but I didn't.
I was so close to winning though.
So I had to pay my uncle a lolly.
I really enjoyed my day. It was so fun. .
Tuesday, July 3, 2018
My speech - Term 2 2018
speak clearly with good volume and pace.
My reading level-Term 2 2018
This is a Level 26 text.
I am reading at my expected level.
Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Saturday, May 19, 2018
Autumn Leaves
WALT create leaf rubbing art. WALT write haiku poems.
Sunday, May 13, 2018
Monday, May 7, 2018
Friday, April 13, 2018
Sunday, March 25, 2018
My brilliant learning wall.
Here is a snapshot of the results of my maths, writing and reading tests and where I am at in my learning.
Sunday, March 18, 2018
Swimming on my back.
My group and I are showing how we
can swim a length of the pool on our backs
with a flutterboard.
Freestyle swim.
My group and I are swimming one length of the pool.
We have been learning the arm actions for Freestyle swim.
Kicking swim.
My group and I are showing our skills
of swimming a length of the pool kicking our feet and using
a flutterboard.
My Reading test Term 1 2018
This is a Level 25 text.
My Time at School is 2 years and 5 months so I am reading
above my expected level.
Friday, March 16, 2018
Thursday, March 15, 2018
Wednesday, March 7, 2018
bucket filling
Walt use the correct Structure and language for Explanation writing
Being a bucket filler.
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Everyone in the world like me carries an invisible bucket. In the invisible bucket there are nice thoughts and feelings.
A bucket filler is a person who says nice words and nice thoughts and if you say nice words and nice thoughts there bucket will be filled of nice thoughts and they will be happy and not sad.
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Bucket Filling can work by putting nice thoughts in other people’s buckets like kind thoughts. Another one is that you have to include others.
I will fill other people buckets by saying nice feelings and kind words and if you fill other people’s bucket they will fill your bucket too . And by saying nice words to each other.And welcome other people. And share with other people.
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When you fill other people’s bucket you fill your own bucket too.
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