Recount Writing-At my brother's birthday.

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At my brother’s birthday.

On Saturday afternoon my family and I went to Rainbows End for my brothers birthday. Before we went we made a cake. It was a  banana cake.

It took about 4 hours to travel to Rainbows End from Kaikohe. When we got to Rainbows End it was full of people.

First all of us went on the rollercoaster. It was scary and it was full.

After our ride on the rollercoaster all of us were hungry so we went to eat. We had an ice cream and some hot dogs. They were yum.  After that we had my brother’s birthday cake. It was delicious.

Next me and my brother went on the merry go round. It was going fast as. It was the scariest ride. Then me and dad went on the on the rollercoaster again. It going as fast as a rocket. I enjoyed the ride. It was amazing.

At the end of the day we were feeling tired. So we got in our car and we dorve home. I went off to sleep in the van.