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I went to the park.
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On Saturday afternoon my family and I went to the park in Kaikohe.
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I felt fantastic because I like playing at the park.
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When we got to the park we saw lots of people on the playground.
I said, “Hmmm what should I play first?”
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The first thing I did at the park was to play on the swing
I felt pumped.
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Next I went on the slide. It was going fast because it was slippery. I felt like I was going like the Flash.
I felt like that I was a horse going fast running around. Then I felt tired so I went to get a drink of water. I went to get one and then I went back on the monkey bars. I said, “Mum, Dad, Nana, Papa, look at me. I can do monkey bars.”
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After that I went to get my bike. I rode the bike around. It was fun and then I went get my bike again. I went down the hole. It felt like I was going down like an airplane. I was going fast as.
This was the best day ever.
Thank you Mum, Dad, Nana, and Papa, for taking me to the park.
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