Recount Writing - At the Tangi

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At the tangi

Yesterday me and my whole family had a tangi in Kaeo for my Aunty Tristen. It was sad because she died.  

We buried Aunty Tristen in a grave.To get to the place where we buried her we had to walk up a big as hill. Then we walked down the hill and then we were there. What a long walk. We buried my aunty in the grave. I walked around to put some dirt in the grave. It was sad.

Then we went back to have lunch. It was yum and I was hungry after my big long walk. Later on me and my two brothers Josh and Jamian played rugby. We played against our Kaeo cousins. They were easy. It was three on four. We won. It was fun.

After dinner me, my three brothers and my mum and dad and nana and papa went to Takou Bay.